V0.2.1 : Reworked several of the new texts.

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Evan Debenham 2014-10-13 16:46:23 -04:00
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3 changed files with 12 additions and 14 deletions

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@ -71,9 +71,8 @@ public class Dungeon {
"Almost all equipment has a strength requirement. Don't overestimate your strength, using equipment you can't " +
"handle has big penalties!\n\nRaising your strength is not the only way to access better equipment, " +
"you can also lower equipment strength requirements with Scrolls of Upgrade.\n\n\n" +
"Items you find in the dungeon will often be unidentified, each potion/scroll/ring/wand will have a" +
"different look each game, and equipment can be upgraded or degraded and cursed. Using an " +
"item for long enough will identify it. Unidentified items are unpredictable, so be careful!",
"Items found in the dungeon will often be unidentified. Some items will have unknown effects, others " +
"may be upgraded, or degraded and cursed! Unidentified items are unpredictable, so be careful!",
"Charging forward recklessly is a great way to get killed.\n\n" +
"Slowing down a bit to examine enemies and use the environment and items to your advantage can make a" +
" big difference.\n\nThe dungeon is full of traps and hidden passageways as well, keep your eyes open!",
@ -84,7 +83,7 @@ public class Dungeon {
"\n\nAny attack on an unaware opponent is guaranteed to hit them.",
"Note to all sewer maintenance & cleaning crews: TURN BACK NOW. Some sort of sludge monster has made its home" +
" here and several crews have taken heavy losses trying to deal with it.\n\n" +
" here and several crews have been lost trying to deal with it.\n\n" +
"Approval has been given to seal off the lower sewers, this area has been condemned, LEAVE NOW.",
"Pixel-Mart - all you need for successful adventure!",

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@ -23,14 +23,13 @@ import com.shatteredpixel.shatteredpixeldungeon.windows.WndStory;
public class IntroScene extends PixelScene {
private static final String TEXT =
"Ever since the fall of the Dwarven Metropolis below, this place has been more of a dungeon than a trade route. " +
"Many heroes of all kinds have ventured into the dungeon before you from the human city above. Some of them " +
"Many heroes have ventured into the dungeon before you from the city above. Some " +
"have returned with treasures and magical artifacts, most have never been heard from again.\n\n" +
"None, however, have dared to venture all the way down and retrieved the Amulet of Yendor, " +
"which is said to be hidden in the depths. Others speak of a mad dwarvern king whos desire for power " +
"awoke an ancient evil. Even now dark energy radiates from the dungeon, slowly making its way up into the city.\n\n" +
"Youre not sure how true the stories are, but you consider yourself ready for the challenge. Most importantly, " +
"you feel that fortune smiles upon you. Its time to start your own adventure in Pixel Dungeon!";
"None, however, have ventured to the bottom and retrieved the Amulet of Yendor, " +
"which is said to be guarded by an ancient evil in the depths. " +
"Even now dark energy radiates from below, making its way up into the city.\n\n" +
"You consider yourself ready for the challenge. Most importantly, " +
"you feel that fortune smiles upon you. It's time to start your own adventure!";
@Override
public void create() {

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@ -47,9 +47,9 @@ public class WndStory extends Window {
static {
CHAPTERS.put( ID_SEWERS,
"The Dungeon lies right beneath the City, its upper levels actually constitute the City's sewer system.\n\n " +
"As dark magic has slowly seeped from below the usually harmless sewer inhabitants have become more and more " +
"dangerous. The city sends guard patrols down here regularly to try and maintain safety for those above, but " +
"they are slowly failing.\n\n This place is dangerous, but a least the dark magic at work here is relatively weak." );
"As dark energy has crept up from below the usually harmless sewer creatures have become more and more " +
"dangerous. The city sends guard patrols down here to try and maintain safety for those above, but " +
"they are slowly failing.\n\n This place is dangerous, but a least the evil magic at work here is weak." );
CHAPTERS.put( ID_PRISON,
"Many years ago an underground prison was built here for the most dangerous criminals. At the time it seemed " +