v0.9.2: further text improvements

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Evan Debenham 2021-02-18 18:29:48 -05:00
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@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ actors.hero.talent.lethal_momentum.desc=_+1:_ When the Warrior lands a killing b
actors.hero.talent.improvised_projectiles.title=improvised projectiles
actors.hero.talent.improvised_projectiles.desc=_+1:_ The Warrior can blind an enemy for _2 turns_ by throwing any item that isnt a thrown weapon at them. This has a 30 turn cooldown.\n\n_+2:_ The Warrior can blind an enemy for _3 turns_ by throwing any item that isnt a thrown weapon at them. This has a 30 turn cooldown.
actors.hero.talent.hold_fast.title=hold fast
actors.hero.talent.hold_fast.desc=_+1:_ When the warrior waits he gains _+2 armor_ until he moves.\n\n_+2:_ When the warrior waits he gains _+4 armor_ until he moves.\n\n_+3:_ When the warrior waits he gains _+6 armor_ until he moves.
actors.hero.talent.hold_fast.desc=_+1:_ When the Warrior waits he gains _+2 armor_ until he moves.\n\n_+2:_ When the Warrior waits he gains _+4 armor_ until he moves.\n\n_+3:_ When the Warrior waits he gains _+6 armor_ until he moves.
actors.hero.talent.strongman.title=strongman
actors.hero.talent.strongman.desc=_+1:_ The Warrior needs _1 less strength_ to use armor.\n\n_+2:_ The Warrior needs _1 less strength_ to use armor and _1 less strength_ to use weapons.\n\n_+3:_ The Warrior needs _2 less strength_ to use armor and _1 less strength_ to use weapons.
actors.hero.talent.endless_rage.title=endless rage
@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ actors.hero.talent.cleave.desc=_+1:_ When the Gladiator kills an enemy, the comb
actors.hero.talent.lethal_defense.title=lethal defense
actors.hero.talent.lethal_defense.desc=_+1:_ When the Gladiator kills an enemy with a combo move, he _regains 33%_ of the broken seal's shielding.\n\n_+1:_ When the Gladiator kills an enemy with a combo move, he _regains 67%_ of the broken seal's shielding.\n\n_+1:_ When the Gladiator kills an enemy with a combo move, he _regains 100%_ of the broken seal's shielding.
actors.hero.talent.enhanced_combo.title=enhanced combo
actors.hero.talent.enhanced_combo.desc=_+1:_ When the Gladiator's combo is 7 or higher, Clobber's knockback range increases to 3, it inflicts vertigo, and it can knock enemies into pits.\n\n_+2:_ In addition to the benefits of +1, when the Gladiator's combo is 9 or higher parry works on multiple attacks.\n\n_+3:_ In addition to the benefits of +1 and +2, the Gladiator can leap up to combo/3 tiles when using Slam, Crush, or Fury.
actors.hero.talent.enhanced_combo.desc=_+1:_ When the Gladiator's combo is 7 or higher, Clobber's knockback range increases to 3, it inflicts vertigo, and it can knock enemies into pits.\n\n_+2:_ In addition to the benefits of +1, when the Gladiator's combo is 9 or higher Parry works on multiple attacks.\n\n_+3:_ In addition to the benefits of +1 and +2, the Gladiator can leap up to combo/3 tiles when using Slam, Crush, or Fury.
actors.hero.talent.empowering_meal.title=empowering meal
actors.hero.talent.empowering_meal.desc=_+1:_ Eating food grants the Mage _2 bonus damage_ on his next 3 wand zaps.\n\n_+2:_ Eating food grants the Mage _3 bonus damage_ on his next 3 wand zaps.
@ -387,7 +387,7 @@ actors.hero.talent.shield_battery.desc=_+1:_ The Mage can self-target with a wan
actors.hero.talent.empowering_scrolls.title=empowering scrolls
actors.hero.talent.empowering_scrolls.desc=_+1:_ When the Mage reads a scroll, his next wand zap within 10 turns will get _+1 level_.\n\n_+2:_ When the Mage reads a scroll, his next wand zap within 10 turns will get _+2 levels_.\n\n_+3:_ When the Mage reads a scroll, his next wand zap within 10 turns will get _+3 levels_.
actors.hero.talent.ally_warp.title=ally warp
actors.hero.talent.ally_warp.desc=_+1:_ The Mage can tap an ally to instantly swap places with them, with a _3 tile range_.\n\n_+2:_ The Mage can tap an ally to instantly swap places with them, with a _6 tile range_.\n\n_+3:_ The Mage can tap an ally to instantly swap places with them, with a _9 tile range_.\n\nThe mage cannot swap places with immobile allies.
actors.hero.talent.ally_warp.desc=_+1:_ The Mage can tap an ally to instantly swap places with them, with a _3 tile range_.\n\n_+2:_ The Mage can tap an ally to instantly swap places with them, with a _6 tile range_.\n\n_+3:_ The Mage can tap an ally to instantly swap places with them, with a _9 tile range_.\n\nThe Mage cannot swap places with immobile allies.
actors.hero.talent.empowered_strike.title=empowered strike
actors.hero.talent.empowered_strike.desc=_+1:_ The Battlemage's first melee strike with his staff after zapping with it deals _+17% damage_.\n\n_+2:_ The Battlemage's first melee strike with his staff after zapping with it deals _+33% damage_.\n\n_+3:_ The Battlemage's first melee strike with his staff after zapping with it deals _+50% damage_.
actors.hero.talent.mystical_charge.title=mystical charge
@ -397,9 +397,9 @@ actors.hero.talent.excess_charge.desc=_+1:_ When the Battlemage's staff is fully
actors.hero.talent.soul_siphon.title=soul siphon
actors.hero.talent.soul_siphon.desc=_+1:_ Melee damage dealt by other characters triggers the Warlock's soul mark at _15% effectiveness_.\n\n_+2:_ Melee damage dealt by other characters triggers the Warlock's soul mark at _30% effectiveness_.\n\n_+3:_ Melee damage dealt by other characters triggers the Warlock's soul mark at _45% effectiveness_.
actors.hero.talent.soul_eater.title=soul eater
actors.hero.talent.soul_eater.desc=_+1:_ Soul mark grants _0.33 turns_ of satiety for each damage dealt. Soul marked enemies have a _10% chance_ to trigger on-eat effects when they die.\n\n_+1:_ Soul mark grants _0.67 turns_ of satiety for each damage dealt. Soul marked enemies have a _20% chance_ to trigger on-eat effects when they die.\n\n_+3:_ Soul mark grants _1 turn_ of satiety for each damage dealt. Soul marked enemies have a _30% chance_ to trigger on-eat effects when they die.
actors.hero.talent.soul_eater.desc=_+1:_ Soul mark grants _0.33 turns_ of satiety for each damage dealt. Soul marked enemies have a _10% chance_ to trigger on-eat effects when they die.\n\n_+2:_ Soul mark grants _0.67 turns_ of satiety for each damage dealt. Soul marked enemies have a _20% chance_ to trigger on-eat effects when they die.\n\n_+3:_ Soul mark grants _1 turn_ of satiety for each damage dealt. Soul marked enemies have a _30% chance_ to trigger on-eat effects when they die.
actors.hero.talent.necromancers_minions.title=necromancer's minions
actors.hero.talent.necromancers_minions.desc=_+1:_ When a soul marked enemy dies, the Warlock has a _10% chance_ to raise them as a corrupted wraith.\n\n_+1:_ When a soul marked enemy dies, the Warlock has a _20% chance_ to raise them as a corrupted wraith.\n\n_+1:_ When a soul marked enemy dies, the Warlock has a _30% chance_ to raise them as a corrupted wraith.
actors.hero.talent.necromancers_minions.desc=_+1:_ When a soul marked enemy dies, the Warlock has a _10% chance_ to raise them as a corrupted wraith.\n\n_+2:_ When a soul marked enemy dies, the Warlock has a _20% chance_ to raise them as a corrupted wraith.\n\n_+3:_ When a soul marked enemy dies, the Warlock has a _30% chance_ to raise them as a corrupted wraith.
actors.hero.talent.cached_rations.title=cached rations
actors.hero.talent.cached_rations.desc=_+1:_ The Rogue can find _4 small rations_ placed in chests while he explores the earlier stages of the dungeon.\n\n_+2:_ The Rogue can find _6 small rations_ placed in chests while he explores the earlier stages of the the dungeon.
@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ actors.hero.talent.evasive_armor.desc=_+1:_ While freerunning, the Freerunner ga
actors.hero.talent.projectile_momentum.title=projectile momentum
actors.hero.talent.projectile_momentum.desc=_+1:_ While freerunning, the Freerunner gains _+20% accuracy and +10% damage_ with thrown weapons.\n\n_+2:_ While freerunning, the Freerunner gains _+40% accuracy and +20% damage_ with thrown weapons.\n\n_+3:_ While freerunning, the Freerunner gains _+60% accuracy and +30% damage_ with thrown weapons.
actors.hero.talent.speedy_stealth.title=speedy stealth
actors.hero.talent.speedy_stealth.desc=_+1:_ The Freerunner gains 2 stacks of momentum per turn while he is invisible.\n\n_+2:_ In addition to the benefits of +1, freerunning no longer counts down while the Freerunner is invisible.\n\n_+3:_ In addition to the benefits of +1 and +2, The Freerunner moves at 2x speed while invisible, regardless of whether he is freerunning or not.
actors.hero.talent.speedy_stealth.desc=_+1:_ The Freerunner gains 2 stacks of momentum per turn while he is invisible.\n\n_+2:_ In addition to the benefits of +1, freerunning no longer counts down while the Freerunner is invisible.\n\n_+3:_ In addition to the benefits of +1 and +2, the Freerunner moves at 2x speed while invisible, regardless of whether he is freerunning or not.
actors.hero.talent.natures_bounty.title=nature's bounty
actors.hero.talent.natures_bounty.desc=_+1:_ The Huntress can find _4 berries_ hidden in tall grass as she explores the earlier stages of the dungeon.\n\n_+2:_ The Huntress can find _6 berries_ hidden in tall grass as she explores the earlier stages of the dungeon.
@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ actors.hero.talent.durable_projectiles.desc=_+1:_ Thrown weapons have _+50% dura
actors.hero.talent.point_blank.title=point blank
actors.hero.talent.point_blank.desc=_+1:_ When the Huntress uses a thrown weapon at melee range it has _-30% accuracy,_ instead of -50%.\n\n_+2:_ When the Huntress uses a thrown weapon at melee range it has _-10% accuracy,_ instead of -50%.\n\n_+3:_ When the Huntress uses a thrown weapon at melee range it has _+10% accuracy,_ instead of -50%.\n\nNote that thrown weapons always have +50% accuracy when used at a distance.
actors.hero.talent.seer_shot.title=seer shot
actors.hero.talent.seer_shot.desc=_+1:_ When the huntress fires an arrow at the ground, it grants vision in a 3x3 area around it for _5 turns_. This has a 20 turn cooldown.\n\n_+2:_ When the huntress fires an arrow at the ground, it grants vision in a 3x3 area around it for _10 turns_. This has a 20 turn cooldown.\n\n_+3:_ When the huntress fires an arrow at the ground, it grants vision in a 3x3 area around it for _15 turns_. This has a 20 turn cooldown.
actors.hero.talent.seer_shot.desc=_+1:_ When the Huntress fires an arrow at the ground, it grants vision in a 3x3 area around it for _5 turns_. This has a 20 turn cooldown.\n\n_+2:_ When the Huntress fires an arrow at the ground, it grants vision in a 3x3 area around it for _10 turns_. This has a 20 turn cooldown.\n\n_+3:_ When the Huntress fires an arrow at the ground, it grants vision in a 3x3 area around it for _15 turns_. This has a 20 turn cooldown.
actors.hero.talent.farsight.title=farsight
actors.hero.talent.farsight.desc=_+1:_ The Sniper's vision range is _increased by 25%_.\n\n_+2:_ The Sniper's vision range is _increased by 50%_.\n\n_+3:_ The Sniper's vision range is _increased by 75%_.
actors.hero.talent.shared_enchantment.title=shared enchantment
@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ actors.hero.talent.durable_tips.desc=_+1:_ Tipped darts have _2x durability_ whe
actors.hero.talent.barkskin.title=barkskin
actors.hero.talent.barkskin.desc=_+1:_ When stepping in grass, the Warden gains barkskin equivalent to her level which fades every _1 turn_.\n\n_+2:_ When stepping in grass, the Warden gains barkskin equivalent to her level which fades every _2 turns_.\n\n_+3:_ When stepping in grass, the Warden gains barkskin equivalent to her level which fades every _3 turns_.
actors.hero.talent.shielding_dew.title=shielding dew
actors.hero.talent.shielding_dew.desc=_+1:_ Dewdrops can shield the Warden for up to _20% of her max HP_.\n\n_+2:_ Dewdrops can shield the Warden for up to _40% of her max HP_.\n\n_+3:_ Dewdrops can shield the Warden for up to _60% of her max HP_.
actors.hero.talent.shielding_dew.desc=_+1:_ Dewdrops can shield the Warden when her health is full, up to _20% of her max HP_.\n\n_+2:_ Dewdrops can shield the Warden when her health is full, up to _40% of her max HP_.\n\n_+3:_ Dewdrops can shield the Warden for when her health is full, up to _60% of her max HP_.
actors.hero.hero.name=you
actors.hero.hero.leave=You can't leave yet, the rest of the dungeon awaits below!

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@ -1184,7 +1184,7 @@ items.wands.wandoffireblast.bmage_desc=When _the Battlemage_ strikes an enemy wi
items.wands.wandoffrost.name=wand of frost
items.wands.wandoffrost.staff_name=staff of frost
items.wands.wandoffrost.desc=This wand seems to be made out of some kind of magical ice. It grows brighter towards its rounded tip. It feels very cold when held, but somehow your hand stays warm.
items.wands.wandoffrost.stats_desc=This wand shoots blasts of icy energy toward your foes, dealing _%1$d-%2$d damage_ and chilling. The effect seems stronger in water. Enemies that are already chilled or frozen enemies take less damage from this wand.
items.wands.wandoffrost.stats_desc=This wand shoots blasts of icy energy toward your foes, dealing _%1$d-%2$d damage_ and chilling. The effect seems stronger in water. Enemies that are already chilled or frozen take less damage from this wand.
items.wands.wandoffrost.bmage_desc=When _the Battlemage_ strikes a chilled enemy with a staff of frost, they have a chance to instantly freeze. This chance becomes greater the more chilled they are.
items.wands.wandoflightning.name=wand of lightning
@ -1637,9 +1637,9 @@ items.brokenseal.choose_title=Choose a Glyph
items.brokenseal.choose_desc=Both this armor and the broken seal are carrying a glyph. Pick which glyph should be kept.\n\nNote that if you pick the glyph that is currently on the armor, the seal will not be able to transfer it later.
items.dewdrop.name=dewdrop
items.dewdrop.heal=%+dHP
items.dewdrop.shield=%+dSHLD
items.dewdrop.both=%1$+dHP, %2$+dSHLD
items.dewdrop.heal=+%dHP
items.dewdrop.shield=+%dSHLD
items.dewdrop.both=+%1$dHP, +%2$dSHLD
items.dewdrop.already_full=You already have full health.
items.dewdrop.desc=A crystal clear dewdrop.\n\nDue to the magic of this place, pure water has minor restorative properties.