From 02a20b083bab86503e165082e1931ed1ae6f0380 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Evan Debenham <Evan@ShatteredPixel.com>
Date: Fri, 10 Oct 2014 17:46:41 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] V0.2.1: Updated sewer character descriptions
---
.../shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Albino.java | 6 ++++++
.../shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Crab.java | 2 +-
.../shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Goo.java | 7 +++++--
.../shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Rat.java | 4 ++--
.../shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Statue.java | 4 ++--
5 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Albino.java b/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Albino.java
index 2ea258e22..bebdcb13f 100644
--- a/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Albino.java
+++ b/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Albino.java
@@ -47,4 +47,10 @@ public class Albino extends Rat {
return damage;
}
+
+ @Override
+ public String description() {
+ return
+ "This is a rare breed of marsupial rat, with pure white fur and jagged teeth.";
+ }
}
diff --git a/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Crab.java b/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Crab.java
index 3986601dd..4e5fbe3af 100644
--- a/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Crab.java
+++ b/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Crab.java
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ public class Crab extends Mob {
public String description() {
return
"These huge crabs are at the top of the food chain in the sewers. " +
- "They are extremely fast and their thick exoskeleton can withstand " +
+ "They are extremely fast and their thick carapace can withstand " +
"heavy blows.";
}
}
diff --git a/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Goo.java b/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Goo.java
index e730e9353..04870a2ca 100644
--- a/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Goo.java
+++ b/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Goo.java
@@ -216,8 +216,11 @@ public class Goo extends Mob {
@Override
public String description() {
return
- "Little known about The Goo. It's quite possible that it is not even a creature, but rather a " +
- "conglomerate of substances from the sewers that gained rudiments of free will.";
+ "Little is known about The Goo. It's quite possible that it is not even a creature, but rather a " +
+ "conglomerate of vile substances from the sewers that somehow gained basic intelligence. " +
+ "Regardless, dark magic is certainly what has allowed Goo to exist.\n\n" +
+ "You feel a chill just from being near Goo, its gelatinus nature has let it absorb lots of dark energy, " +
+ "you can feel it just from being near. If goo is able to attack with this energy you won't live for long.";
}
private final String PUMPEDUP = "pumpedup";
diff --git a/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Rat.java b/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Rat.java
index c723da3fd..2a0349efa 100644
--- a/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Rat.java
+++ b/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Rat.java
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ public class Rat extends Mob {
@Override
public String description() {
return
- "Marsupial rats are aggressive, but rather weak denizens " +
- "of the sewers. They can be dangerous only in big numbers.";
+ "Marsupial rats are aggressive but rather weak denizens " +
+ "of the sewers. They have a nasty bite, but are only life threatening in large numbers.";
}
}
diff --git a/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Statue.java b/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Statue.java
index 124f976dd..ba3bcd434 100644
--- a/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Statue.java
+++ b/src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/actors/mobs/Statue.java
@@ -144,8 +144,8 @@ public class Statue extends Mob {
@Override
public String description() {
return
- "You would think that it's just another ugly statue of this dungeon, but its red glowing eyes give itself away. " +
- "While the statue itself is made of stone, the _" + weapon.name() + "_, it's wielding, looks real.";
+ "You would think that it's just another one of this dungeon's ugly statues, but its red glowing eyes give it away." +
+ "\n\nWhile the statue itself is made of stone, the _" + weapon.name() + "_, it's wielding, looks real.";
}
private static final HashSet<Class<?>> RESISTANCES = new HashSet<Class<?>>();